by Mr. T in DC

A question asked by Loving Kitty: This was a poem about the love between a vampire and a guy. any improvements or tips?
Torn

He sees the pure white mist,
Every inch of land, by the moon, kissed,
The land sings the moons croon,
A mysterious, alluring tune.

This black night has begun,
What I will do, cannot be undone,
Tonight, on him I dine,
I immerse myself in fine red wine.

But I am torn between,
His blood and the man who calls me queen,
Should i want what’s mine?
I long for us both to intertwine.

The rhythm of his pulse,
Should I deny my killing impulse,
Touch my lips to his skin
at the burning dip under his chin.

A kiss, It is not smart,
I love the beating of his warm heart,
Shoud it stop with a bight?
And stop our loves angelic delight?

No. No he cannot die,
Our love should be allowed soar, fly.
Ignore his lovely taste,
A love like this cannot go to waste.

The No 1 answer:

Answer by -jAYNA?
i like it, but it seems it should have more syllabulls in some of the lines(:

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Question by Loving Kitty: My revised Vampire love poem? Any other tips?
Torn

He gazes at the pure white mist,
Everything is glowing, moon kissed,
The land sings the moon’s lovely croon,
Mysterious, alluring tune.

This black and white night has begun,
What I will do, can’t be undone,
Tonight, on his life, I will dine,
I’ll fill myself with fine red wine.

My heart and mind are torn between,
His blood and he who calls me queen,
Can I not want what could be mine?
I long for us to intertwine.

The potent rhythm of his pulse,
Should I deny this strong impulse,
To touch my lips to his soft skin
at burning dip under his chin.

A kiss, I know it is not smart,
I love the beating of his heart,
Shoud it stop with a sharp bite?
Stop our loves angelic delight?

No. I just cannot let him die,
Our love should be allowed fly.
I can ignore his lovely taste,
A love like this can’t go to waste.

Top answer:

Answer by ohiostatebuck_i
Proof read it and spell check it. Good though.

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by Fast Forward Event Productions

Question by Bailey B: We are looking to go on our (late) honeymoon and we LOVE wine/tasting/scenery/food.?
any good locations that I can research? i have no idea where to even begin. we live in pa, but we dont care if we drive or fly.

The top answer:

Answer by Taz
In the USA California Wine Country would be a good place for you guys. Out of the US try somewhere like Tuscany Italy.

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by DanielBeamanAmericanPhotographer

Question posed by classicguy4u22: I would love to open a wine store in the NYC area. Is wine tasting in store allowed?
Also any other tips that can help me advertise my store location?

Chosen answer:

Answer by chefgrille
Wine tasting in store depends on what type of liquor license you apply for. Make sure you check the right boxes on the forms and do absolutely everything they ask you to do.

As far as advertising, I’ve found the newspapers to be my best bet. Not just an opening ad, but drop a press release to the papers and they may even feature you in the business section or so. That’s how I find out about new restaurants and wine shops, I see it in the local paper. And that worked when I still had my restaurant, if I didn’t advertise every week, people would call wondering if I’d closed!

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